Wednesday, November 4, 2009

MAKING OF A CLASSIC

When it rains, it pours,
Twilight,
Or is it Aurora?
Season 7, episode 21of ‘if it tarries’
Yet the plot thickens,
I must be all that,
For all these to beleaguer,
The shutters of my eyes quiver,
A song stirs in my spirit,
It’s on continuous play,
It stays till I’m comforted,
I summon courage for yet another day,
Around the corner is near,
The fragrance called ‘victory’ is stuck in my nostrils,
The goose flesh testifies,
Its time,
My inheritance in installments,
In step with my King,
Rhythm in our sync,
The cheer of my Father,
The dance of my Mother,
The village square theatricals,
A son’s sojourn has yielded bountifully,
Purpose has been achieved,
Only because I am a bosom friend,
Of the Author,
And the Finisher,
And we took every step of the journey together.

14 comments:

simeone said...

and this one is a classic ...
standing ovation bro...

Debbie said...

Wow! a classic indeed. I just love the way you write.

jhazmyn said...

The fragrance called ‘victory’ is stuck in my nostrils,
The goose flesh testifies,........


I love those words...almost like i can perceive the fragrance myself and see my skin break out in bumps

Rita said...

"A son’s sojourn has yielded bountifully,
Purpose has been achieved,
Only because I am a bosom friend,
Of the Author,
And the Finisher,
And we took every step of the journey together."

I love these words, the conclusion, a reminder that when we do it with God, it is always a success.

Well done.

Myne Whitman said...

I like the poem and especially the conclusion. God is the only author and finisher of our faith.

chichi said...

lovely poem. in the pressece of our all the lord has crowned and honored us becos he that promised is faithful to deliever.

hope ur good

David C Brown said...

Like the finish too - to walk with Him!

Toks A. Huss said...

Very impressive!

The poets voice ~~~ said...

"Only because I am a bosom friend,
Of the Author,
And the Finisher,
And we took every step of the journey together" - i love the way this ends..God is the author anf finisher of our faith, what He has started, He will perefect it but we have to walk with Him, hand in hand!

God bless you, keep using your talent for His kingdom!

Rita said...

Thank you for your comment on my blog. Gosh, where have you been?

Hope you enjoyed the holidays. Happy New Year and please dont be gone from blogging for long :-)

chichi said...

Happy New year, thought you would be back by now :(
anyway hope you're well.

Rita said...

Ok, just missed reading your poems.

Telekinesys said...

Hey guys, i'm so sorry i've been away for too long,but i'm back i pray my verses bless you all through 2010.

prashant said...

I just love the way you write.
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